I like how you used so many different adjectives to describe summer! Using a lot of vocabulary helps your readers understand your emotions and ideas, which make activates their imagination and empathy! I also love how you associated pictures with your text! Now, I really can't wait for this season to be back!
I just have one question, what is a 'kahuna wave'?
Hi Mrs Mathilde thank you for giving me feedback I worked really hard to make my poem rhyme. In surfing some people use kahuna to describe big waves so I used it to rhyme with my poem.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you used so many different adjectives to describe summer! Using a lot of vocabulary helps your readers understand your emotions and ideas, which make activates their imagination and empathy! I also love how you associated pictures with your text!
Now, I really can't wait for this season to be back!
I just have one question, what is a 'kahuna wave'?
Miss Mathilde!
Hi Mrs Mathilde thank you for giving me feedback I worked really hard to make my poem rhyme. In surfing some people use kahuna to describe big waves so I used it to rhyme with my poem.
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I can see that you worked really hard! Well done! I haven't read yet your new incredible story about your sport competition!
DeleteThanks the information about the waves and for sharing so much knowledge with us!
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DeleteHi Mrs Mathilde I recommend you read my sports story its really interesting and also thank you for replying.
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